Rough Cut

We have reviewed all of our raw footage and edited all of our best shots into the order in which we intend them to appear. We have also cut some of the shots to their appropriate lengths. There are lots of points for improvement however, which we acquired from a feedback session of 9 of our peers; the general consensus for improvement were these...

Evaluation Points:

• Add sound effects to emphasise events e.g. car running over Adam and Max slamming the table.

• Edit the car scene to cut out continuity errors and fine tune it to make it look more realistic i.e. speed the shot up when reversed. Cut out unnecessary shots.

• Add institutional information at the beginning (Miramax for distributor first and then our own studio/producer).

• Record dialogue of Kieran whispering into Adam's ear.

• Reduce the overall running time.

• Add soundtrack that emphasises each individual scenes' mood and atmosphere.